Hi there, I have recently finished writing the pilot episode for a television series. It is 56 pages long and is similar to the likes of Heroes or X-men. I was wondering, because I have been working on this and nothing else for the past few weeks, if anyone was willing to read it for me and give me a bit of feedback? I have worries about the format, action chunks and story and I think it would help if someone with a fresh pair of eyes could give me their take on it please? Could you let me know if you are willing to read the script for me and I could email it to you. Thank you in advance.