CLOSED FOR SUBMISSIONS
This service is temporarily suspended for the summer while I work on my own writing, and on the Screenwriting Goldmine Screenplay competition.
If you’d like a quick summary of what I think of your script, the best thing is to enter the competition and pay the additional fee to apply for feedback. You get a one page quick bulletin of what I liked and what I think needs work.
If you want anything more substantial, by which I mean proper, professional level development notes that will guide you towards taking your script to another draft, then I strongly recommend Philip Shelley.
Philip has years, and YEARS of top level professional experience and, having had his eagle eye cast over a script of mine recently, I can vouch for the fact that he’ll give you a solid critique, with proper support, and proper guidance where needed.
You can find him at http://www.script-consultant.co.uk
Tell him you’re from the Goldmine…
