If I want to describe a character's actions while the character is in dialogue, does the descriptor go before or after the dialogue in question? For example: Johnny grinned as he spoke through clenched teeth. His eyes were narrowing into a threatening glare while sweat dripped from his nose. BLACKJACK JOHNNY I've never killed a man, Renzo. No, I make sure they all live. So they can tell their kids what terror looks like. Is the description of Johnny supposed to occur before or after he speaks to Renzo? (New poster lesson 1: Indentation doesn't work. Sorry!) Thanks for your help!