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Old 18th November 2008, 21:19
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I am in the process of rewriting my first script in order to enter it into the Phoenix Film Festival. When I originally wrote the first draft (about a year ago), I chose Zak as the name of the main character and I titled the screenplay, Zak Goes Back to School. Since then, as you are all aware, Kevin Smith released, Zack and Miri Make a Porno. My husband thinks that I should completely change the name of the main character and screenplay title in light of Kevin Smith's film.

What are your thoughts?

Thanks so much!
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Karen, Karen, Karen!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good to see you're working hard with your marketing. That's the ticket.

I would change it to one of these

Isaac

Jak

Zan




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Give him a fun and different name.

Lane

Lucas

It actually takes me a few days to stick with a name, but then again why not stick with Zack? I don't think it matters that another movie has that name in it.
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Jack.

It's simple, kinda rhymes with back...

Or better yet....

"Sheriff Joe"!

How's that?
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I chose Zak as the name of the main character and I titled the screenplay, Zak Goes Back to School. Since then, as you are all aware, Kevin Smith released, Zack and Miri Make a Porno.
Keep Zak. Different spelling, different plot, different screenplay, different everything. Just MHO

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Hey Karen,

Yeah, I aree with Lynn. I don't think you'd have to change the name. Besides, it probably won't be produced until well after the buzz surrounding Smith's film has faded (it pretty much already has, right? lol). I don't think many people will make a connection just because of the names Zack/Zak. The title would have to be much more similar in order for there to be a similarity problem.
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Thank you all so much for your feedback! I have really gotten attached to the name so I will probably keep it for now unless another name really inspires me.
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Thanks, Scrivener. I don't use a Mac, though.
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then maybe try

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&s...indows&spell=1

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That's great. Thanks, Scrivener!
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